Comment on For Want of a Coffee

  1. Nemainofthewater Thu 16 Dec 2021 09:48AM UTC

    Dearest Author, first of all, you won’t believe the noise of joy and excitement that I made when I saw what you’d written!!!I am *very* excited to see it!!

    This review is very much going to be my live-blogging thoughts as I read it, so please the incoherency!

    I adore your Shang Qinghua! He is so grumpy and I love the fact that he got rid of coffee for Peerless Cucumber! So many regrets SQH! The litany of things that he wishes that he included in the novel are hilarious (especially clocks for some reason)

    He said it out loud, YES I love this grumpy Peak Lord, please roast your martial siblings! The fact that he gets out of trouble by fainting on command is just the cherry on the cake!

    SQH and his appreciation of SQQ for on-time and legible paperwork is the BEST I love it

    Actually not spoke too soon, SQH’s habit of accidentally writing himself and his crush into his novels is, in fact, the best. OOOMG SQH you’re the worst I love you, you’re rivalling your transmigrator bro for cluelessness.

    SQQ being his editor! SQH is receiving validation and I am so happy for him!! And lol SQH missing his writing being torn apart by black Powder fans

    SQH!!!! Stands up to Qi Qiingqi!!!! For SQQ!!!!! Aaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    SQH’s justifications for improving SQQ’s reputation are very cute and I am glad that his System… well I don’t think it believed him but at least it isn’t penalising him!

    Shang Qinghua!! What a good plan! I don’t know where this is going exactly, but I for one am excited for this road trip!


    “I’m not lying! I’ll have you know that I’ve never told a single lie in my life,” Shang Qinghua says in his defense, you know, like a liar.
     I burst out laughing at this line!

    SQQ FOUND A COFFEE PLANT!! Best friend. Best goals!!

    This was SO GOOD I am tearing up, thank you so much for this gift ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    PS: SQQ’s thoughts are also hilarious. He really is a cat! 100%!

    PPS:

    OMAKEUnbeknownst to Shang Qinghua, he did write coffee in PIDW. In one of the demonic feast scenes after Luo Binghe conquers the world and becomes the emperor, one of his wives (wife #126, a Northern ice demoness) is mentioned to be sipping on a mocha Frappuccino. The only reason Shang Qinghua doesn’t remember any negative feedback is because the orgy scene that followed was so atrociously bad that Peerless Cucumber went over the character limit on his comment.

    THIS!!! Omg she was sipping on a mocha Frappuccino, I can’t even 😂😂😂😂

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    1. BookKeep Sat 01 Jan 2022 04:45AM UTC

      KuroHikaTsuchi

      Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! 💖

      It was a blast to write! I had a lot of fun with SQH's POV! Your prompts were *chef's kiss*, it was hard to choose which one to work on!

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