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  1. abeautifultruth on Chapter 1 Sun 28 Nov 2021 10:42PM UTC

    Was this written in Spanish originally? Cause some of the translations aren’t quite right in English. I mean it mostly makes sense still. If you ever need someone who speaks fluent English to correct some of the mistakes I would be more then happy too. Wonderful story btw, I can’t wait to read more. 💜

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    1. Lizzy0305 on Chapter 1 Mon 29 Nov 2021 08:52AM UTC

      Oh no this is not a translation. I'm Hungarian, but I write in English. If you'd like to edit the story, my email is [email protected], I'd really appreciate some help! Drop me an email, or if you have a better way to do it, I'm listening :) thanks so much for offering! And I'm glad you like the story regardless!

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      1. abeautifultruth on Chapter 1 Fri 17 Dec 2021 12:42AM UTC

        Hey, sorry it’s been so long! I’ll send you an email here soon. You’re story doesn’t need a ton of editing. It’s mostly just grammar and wrong verb tense. You did very well overall though. This is definitely a fanfic that I’ll be reading again and again. 💜💜💜💜

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        1. Lizzy0305 on Chapter 1 Fri 24 Dec 2021 08:27AM UTC

          Thanks so much, I'm really glad to hear it doesn't need much work! Look, take your time I won't have time to edit just now anyway for a few weeks.

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