Comment on The Two Sides of The Coin That Is Peter Parker

  1. Angie (Guest) on Chapter 1 Mon 13 Sep 2021 11:54PM UTC

    Really good concept and really straight forward but I gotta say it felt a little rushed especially the Convo between Spidey and iron man in chapter 3, also a bit messy with how it was stated that the internship was for 13-18 year olds yet peter was the first highschooler/youngest person selected because they normally don't go for highschooler??? Still definitely not the worse thing I've read and like I said the concept sounds really good just feel like it could have been written with a little more patients and finess

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