Comment on Inventing Paradoxes

  1. Limonium on Chapter 1 Sun 25 Jul 2021 02:36PM UTC

    i am very entertained i mightve choked on my water, snorted too many times and this is just the first chapter!!!! 😂😭

    i love how you wrote tom's thought process, i was yelling at a friend while i was reading and we both agree he exudes himbo energy even if he's not built like one 🥺💓

    parts that almost killed me(from laughing):
    The professors exchanged meaningful looks as the Fat Friar floated away, mumbling something about a disembodied ear.

    The first part was an elation. In fact, it was downright offensive that Slughorn refused to believe that it referred to him. Of course he was the Dark Lord from the House of Serpents.

    He was going to avoid their mistakes and surpass them. Having the confirmation that he would succeed was gratifying.

    Somehow, he would defeat Tom with some power unknown to him. What could Potter know that Tom didn’t?
    - im fucking crying because, as ive ranted somewhere, this poor lad, im so embarrassed for u please

    Additional Tags: FALLING IN LOVE 😭😭😭😭😭😭

    That was it. Quidditch. The power that he knows not must be Quidditch.


    - 😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    Tom curled his lip in distaste, both at the thought of being someday defeated by Quidditch (how would that even work ?) and of having to master Quidditch to prevent his defeat.
    - dear author please i wasnt ready send help i cant get up im crying

    Potter was calm, almost insultingly so.
    THIS RIGHT HERE!!!! IM YELLING LIKE

    (italicized tenderly) OH. OH NO.
    the DEAL AND NEGOTIATIONS HAPPENS AFTER afshdjfkglglh

    i love this, i love your writing!!! kudos!! i am going to bed with plenty of serotonin. please have a good day!! 💓💓💓💓🌈🌈🌈🌈😂😂🥺

    Last Edited Sun 25 Jul 2021 02:41PM UTC

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    1. Ailora on Chapter 1 Wed 28 Jul 2021 03:00AM UTC

      I had to look up "himbo" -- thank you for teaching me a new term.

      And thank you for the review, I'm glad you found these lines funny! It was fun for me to write them too.

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    2. belitcats on Chapter 1 Fri 19 Jan 2024 12:43PM UTC

      no these are my exact reactions eating my lunch lmaooo

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