hngnfnfhf i am. gnawing at my fist. i love your writing style and your use of symbolic devices. kdj dissociating back into the subway was so heartbreaking to read, then you had yjh read aloud to kdj and kdj manages to resurface and i just?? ugly sobbing god you wrote them both so well, their characterization and dynamic feels so right, like it's a spot-on kinda thing. i can't count how many times i got goosebumps throughout the fic, but here are some moments i'm sure i did
Kim Dokja looks over at him, blinking once, then twice.
He got off the subway.
“Oh,” Kim Dokja says, tone deceitfully even. You’re so handsome. “Your hair.”
How fortunate I am to have been wrong, Kim Dokja reflects, looking back at this round’s Yoo Joonghyuk with sad eyes, how fortunate, and how undeserving.
“I don’t,” Yoo Joonghyuk urges, leaning forward again as his eyes bore into Kim Dokja’s. “Kim Dokja, I’m not like you — I need you to tell me.”
thank you so much for writing this fic!!! i loved every single second i was reading it <3
hello!! thank you for not only reading but taking the time to leave such a wonderful comment as well i’m flattered to hear that you liked my writing and characterization 🤍 particularly thrilled that you liked the “your hair” line as that’s one of my favorites as well ehehe..
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