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  1. I don't understand (Guest) on Chapter 3 Tue 16 Mar 2021 09:50PM UTC

    Not all stories are going to be perfect. This is fan fiction not a certified book and even then there are mistakes but that last comment about your opinion and what the author is going to do about it was a little rude. You made it seem like you are frustrated and angry in the comment and the Sofia is just responding to that. It's not trying to actively insult you just saying in a way you should calm down a little.

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    1. Emily734 on Chapter 3 Wed 17 Mar 2021 05:55AM UTC

      Stating I have deep seated issues is actively insulting me, and the fact that you are ok with this is not shocking but sad that everyone agrees with the rebuttal when they don’t agree with the other persons no matter what the rebuttal says.

      -if you read my comment all I stated is why I didn’t like the story (where I think the author can improve and the fact that you say that is rude proves my point you can’t say anything negative even if it’s constructive criticism) and knowing that a lot of authors on this sight don’t like anyone saying anything negative about their work (both from personal experience and seeing it with other comments) I wrote my option on what I highly believe the authors response was going to be.
      Nothing wrong with stating an option on something and the fact that you think it’s so rude it’s what wrong with the world today no one can say anything even if you don’t agree with them going strait into saying they have issues and not have a productive conversation is why this world is going to hell.

      -“You seem to have some deep-rooted issues, mate. Chill out, yeah?” that is not an appropriate way to tell someone to “calm down”.

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      1. Inupi_big_brother_is_sesshomaru on Chapter 3 Thu 27 Jan 2022 10:38PM UTC

        I am sorry. I didn’t mean to offend you. I just said as I felt. I didn’t think to much into what was commented. I am sorry this apology is late. I think I was just trying to get across was that your message felt like it was aggressive.

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      2. Inupi_big_brother_is_sesshomaru on Chapter 3 Thu 27 Jan 2022 10:43PM UTC

        It’s not that is disagree or agree with your opinions. I agree with some of them. When I first commented I didn’t see the problem or understand why you are were upset. That was my problem.

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        1. Emily734 on Chapter 3 Thu 24 Mar 2022 01:48AM UTC

          If you read the full thread properly you’ll see I’ve already commented on this but I’ll restate it again . Baste on past experiences and seeing it happen to other people writers on this website no want any constructive creative that’s why I said “… do with this what you will.. . like most authors…

          Thanks so much for agreeing with the comments about me have “deep rooted issues “ and attack my mental health good on you.

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            1. Emily734 on Chapter 3 Thu 24 Mar 2022 11:37PM UTC

              You don’t like what they said you don’t like what I said but in the end you only comment on what I said. Interesting.

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                1. Emily734 on Chapter 3 Fri 25 Mar 2022 12:43AM UTC

                  You feel obligated (and very passionate)to respond to my comments so why not theirs. You to are assuming that I’m attacking the author when I’m just giving my observation like I said in my original comment and like I’ve been saying time and time again.

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                    1. Emily734 on Chapter 3 Fri 25 Mar 2022 02:16AM UTC

                      Again that fact that you feel so obligated to defend only the author a stranger but not jump in when another stranger is being attacked just because they are strangers (even if I was defending my self quite well it’s still one person vs 1-3 people by saying nothing your giving your approval allowing that person to think what they say is ok) and expect me to consider your “feedback” then your sadly mistaken.

                      You could have easily said I don’t agree with the last part of that comment but you shouldn’t attack anyone’s mental health but instead you choose to ignore that and just stay how rude I am and ignore everything else so of course I’m going to think you agree with their statements.

                      I don’t care if you think I’m rude I said what I said from my past experiences with other authors telling me to f*** off when I give any type or criticism so I just make it easy and insert what I know they will likely do (9 out of 10 authors do it and that was before I started saying you can do what everyone you want with my feedback….)

                      Ya was it rude sure but I’m tired of authors and others telling me to F off because they don’t like my constructive criticism and it’s not just me saying I think your works bad but it’s how they can improve and I give examples. The ideas are there just not the exaction and a lot of people on this platform if you say anything that’s not praise they delete your comment or tell you to F off so I say do whatever you want with my feedback… and I will continue to do so because of that 9 it of 10.

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