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  1. PearlTopaz Fri 05 Feb 2021 03:41PM UTC

    i almost missed class for this but!!!! totally worth it omg

    i definitely almost cried but like, in a good way!! u did such a good job w the emotions and anxiety and making it feel like it was building throughout which made the ending that much better

    also it was obvs a sad scene but i did laugh a little at the did-we-watch-moana scene because roman saying “oh whoops! that didn’t actually happen! my bad! got to go! :D” is just so ironic

    anyways super super good writing and the whole thing was so emotional and the ending was perfect

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