This was a delight to read! I was reminded how much I adore your characterizations of both the ever curious and adventure seeking Steve and the 'kinda an asshole' Herobrine. Their grumpy/happy dynamic never fails to bring a smile to my face. Also just love the way you write. It's easy to follow along. The descriptions are perfect. And the interactions are fun. I love Brine essentially saying "get off my lawn you darn kid". There were just so many little things that caught my eye. Like Steve's interactions with the village. His armor. Herobrines comments on the armor. The description of Herobrine’s 'house'. Ugh so good. Can't wait to read more!
Thank you, I’m glad you like it! I actually make an effort to have their interactions believable, so I’m glad I’m succeeding! ^_^ I find that dialogue is easier to write while scene work is like pulling teeth. I just want to skip to the parts where they talk lol.
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