I love these three. While Obi-wan is my favourite. I think that Obi-wan and Anakin do complete each other. They are the true brothers of the force, The Team. And Ahsoka adds a sweet flavour to their family. Yup I love these 3. Specially when they are being soft to each other like this.
So yeah lovely fic. Anakin’s characterisation is really moving. I feel the pain emanating from words. His struggle with his emotions is top notch. One thing I wish was there or should I say one of my wish that clone wars missed to do was showing us normal hair no beard Obi-wan with his baby face and people having a hard time being angry with him. The excuse could be that they were gonna use nano tech to grow his hair and beard back. But after regrowing the hair, the machine malfunctioned. And Obi-wan was left with Master Obi-wan hair but padawan Kenobi face. And anakin has to deal with hard nostalgia of time spent with padawan/young knight Kenobi. And without the beard Obi-wan is having a hard time hiding emotions. Whoops I went way off topic here.
I have no issues. I loved the way you dealt with it. This is basically how it should’ve happened in TCW. Anakin and Obi-wan admitting their emotions like that and Ahsoka getting tired of their shit and locking them in a room. Ahsoka was always the smart one, emotionally that is. Apologies for this wall of text I got carried away. Have a great day and wishing you well for all your projects.
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Emily (Guest) Sun 29 Nov 2020 09:26AM UTC
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