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  1. KibaStray on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 12:38PM UTC

    This is an interesting start. I like it. there are so few DMC crossover fics, I hope you continue it.

    IDKY but I feel like this fic it could have Izuku not go to UA (at first) and be alright.

    Imma ramble for a bit on what I mean so please forgive me:
    I can so totally see Trish training, teaching, and informing Izuku of who he is during the "Ten Months."
    In her own way of coarse. My guess would she would give him a gun and sword, kick him into a group of low level demons and telling him to figure it out.
    After he he figures it out Trish then starts telling him about his blood line and what it means for Izuku.
    The "Ten Months" continues and Izuku gets better and better. Gets good enough to actually take out a few high rank demons on his own. (well Trish is still there for support, but still he took them out himself)
    With all the demon slaying that he has done with Trish he tells his mother that he got an intern job. (IDK if you are going to cover up his demon work from inko. I only put this part in because it looks like Izuku is not a natural green haired teen and is actually naturally white haired. And IDK yet if Inko is dying his hair green because drama reasons or protective reasons or instead it is Izuku's own choice. so....?)
    Time moves on and Izuku has gotten good at his job. 'A hero in my own way' he would think. 'protecting people from things they don't even know they need to worry about' (and the entry exam for UA is forgotten about. He has online classes anyway)
    (this part is self-indulgent) Izuku still is the kind hearted kid he always was and helps people out when he can. (by this point helping people 'small' things is far more than helping old ladies across the street or getting a cat out of a tree) gaining an unofficial title of vigilante. (only because I want to see Izuku in a green-scale version of Dante's outfit)
    Anyway... Izuku gets told by Trish to check out some things in Mustafu because word in the underground is something is going to go down.
    The tips Trish got is right and Izuku stumbles on the USJ as Iida leaves.
    He helps out for a few reasons. 1) he still has a heroic heart 2) the big guy with his brain exposed is giving off some demonic energy
    He helps with the villains. (do that how ever you want. there are too many things I would want to do with the USJ that I will just leave it for better minds to imagine)
    Before he can leave he gets caught by all the other teachers coming to help.
    And thus gets to attend UA.
    ((added drama points if at this point Izuku has stopped dying his hair and let it turn white completely. that way All Might and Bakugou can't understand why they get the feeling that they know this kid from somewhere.))

    So yeah, that is kinda a barebones idea of how I could see Izuku skipping out on the first few weeks of UA only to make a splash at the Sports Festival later.

    Keep up the good work. and remember "Have Fun With It."

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    1. Account Deleted on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 01:08PM UTC

      I'm guessing in this scenario either Mineta or toru would get kicked out of Class 1A by Aizawa leaving one spot open for Izuku.

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      1. KibaStray on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 01:30PM UTC

        Why does everyone kick out toru!?! I dont get it. She is a sweet girl with a good quirk. I really dont get why people boot her so often.

        And actually you could leave the class the same. Just give them some no name rando to fill spot 20 that gets kicked out day 1.

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        1. Account Deleted on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 01:43PM UTC

          Fair enough.

          Though gonna have to argue about Toru having a good quirk for now the only thing she can do is be invisible by being buck naked and also slightly bend light. It has potential (The light bending part) but the invisibility is a pretty bad power for a peacekeeper to have. (Though it a good power for a spy)

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          1. KibaStray on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 09:05PM UTC

            Sucker punches. She has an advantage fighting people. Try fighting an opponent you cant see. Also once she is out on the streets fighting crime it shouldnt take long before criminals start to get paranoid that she is around and stop doing crime. (Probably will only work on low level criminals, but still)

            So all she needs is some good cqc training and she could be a great prevention hero

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            1. GhostRuby on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 11:22PM UTC

              Toru going dark

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              1. MadManGoodDay on Chapter 2 Wed 01 Jun 2022 04:05AM UTC

                Rando grunt: well fuck my life here we go again

                Also dumb question but why is there no grand theft auto fics with the baby bean in them or if there is point or wack me with one damnit
                Sorry bout my randomness

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    3. GhostRuby on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 06:51PM UTC

      Honestly love this whole idea, but I am going to make him attend UA because I think that despite everything I'm gonna put him through it's still his dream school.

      And yeah to the whole Trish training him by throwing him into a pack of low level demons, I just want to sprinkle in flashbacks to his training either at the beginning of a chapter or somewhere on the middle just so that I can get more creative and have fun with his training.

      His hair is naturally green but is turning more and more white the more of his demonic power surfaces, at the entrance exam hes gonna be at about the same power as DMC 3 Dante.

      Thank you for the review!

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      1. Account Deleted on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 07:27PM UTC

        DMC3 dante?

        Low whistle. You weren't kidding when you put that OP izuku tag were you?

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        1. GhostRuby on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 11:15PM UTC

          One does not simply put the op tag and not mean it

          but currently he's still weaker that dmc3

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        2. GhostRuby on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 11:21PM UTC

          Pre awakened dante

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      3. KibaStray on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 09:08PM UTC

        Yeah didnt think it would go that wqy honestly.

        At least i was right on the Trish part.

        Then Inko dosent know about izuku's bloodline? Interesting

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        1. GhostRuby on Chapter 2 Tue 17 Nov 2020 11:17PM UTC

          Nope, it's not really something she needs to know.

          I mean how do you explain your part of a bloodline that's been instrumental in holding back the gats of hell?

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          1. KibaStray on Chapter 2 Wed 18 Nov 2020 02:11AM UTC

            Good point

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          2. Andrew (Guest) on Chapter 2 Tue 02 Feb 2021 08:50AM UTC

            *BFG9000 INTENSIFIES*

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