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Hi, just thought I’d point this out. I’m surprised I even noticed it because my memory isn’t that great.You have Vader standing: “Darth Vader didn't sit down but stood opposite him, hands behind his back.”And then a few paragraphs down:“The aforementioned transmission we received,” said Vader, shifting slightly on his seat, “was an ultimatum.”
Hi, just thought I’d point this out. I’m surprised I even noticed it because my memory isn’t that great.
You have Vader standing: “Darth Vader didn't sit down but stood opposite him, hands behind his back.”
And then a few paragraphs down:“The aforementioned transmission we received,” said Vader, shifting slightly on his seat, “was an ultimatum.”
Oh. I didn't even notice either, thank you for pointing it out! I'll change it now.
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