Comment on this is your heart (can you feel it?)

  1. Account Deleted Wed 05 Aug 2020 07:26AM UTC

    This... This is wonderful, please???
    Really a lovely read. I like how you potrayed their relationship in this, it felt very warm without being too far away from the canon one.

    The emotional moments, which are a big part of this work, were also very well made. I liked especially the beach one, the final one, and the little implication of Midoriya actually attempting suicide (I wonder if anybody in his old school knows?). Also, the Todorokis loving and caring and missing each other is a touch I feel like was needed. I love how they find comfort in each other and their reactions to things feel so like them, if that makes sense?? You did really well with this piece. It's also nice to imagine how their relationship would evolve, once in UA, in each other's company...

    I think they would still be very important and present. But it could also be because my TodoDeku heart was set ablaze by this even more than it usually is.

    So, to avoid making it longer than it already is: thanks for sharing, I really liked it!

    Last Edited Wed 05 Aug 2020 07:29AM UTC

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