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  1. Ael on Chapter 57 Wed 29 Jul 2020 09:19PM UTC

    This was a good chapter. Things are getting further and further from the timeline that Thor knows and that’s always good for a hefty twist or two.

    I think there might be a minor thing you want to fix though, there’s a sentence left unfinished when Clint goes to talk to Fury: “He looked like he’d had a very long day. Clint could understand why. Pierce had been a colleague for ”

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    1. Taaroko on Chapter 57 Wed 29 Jul 2020 09:25PM UTC

      Glad you liked it! The goal was pretty much always to negate the advantage Thor had from his future knowledge by making the new timeline unrecognizable.

      Whoops! Thanks for the heads up. Fixed it.

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