Comment on Meeting Mr. Fenton

1. mizstorge Fri 17 May 2013 11:37AM UTC

   

   Great characterization! Bringing in Jarvis was a brilliant plot device, to ignite the conversation in the penthouse, and as a bridge to the cemetery scene. And the ending was topped off with a perfect, Plastic_Cello-brand dollop of angst. Thanks for posting this!

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2. 1. goldenwatcher Fri 17 May 2013 12:06PM UTC

      

      Aw, thank you! I wasn't sure about Loki calling Tony daddy-o, but it needed a personal touch and they were no where near 'little Stark' so yeah.

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