This was absolutely beautiful; I loved your interpretation of how it would be like when Tony and Loki met up again. I especially loved the correlation between Tony unable to find his shoe despite it being in plain sight - the same way Loki was in plain sight and Tony couldn't find him either.
I'm going to send you a message on Tumblr, because I don't want to give anything away in the comments. But I have another comment I'd like to pass on about what you've written. Aside from I positively adored it and thank you so much for writing it! *bows down to you* <3
I love that you love it. Your last chapter just laid this out in my head and it left me near tears a couple of times. I tend to want to write to get things out of my head, since I daydream in full stories anyways. I'm so glad you gave permission for it's posting, and even more so that you liked it. I doubt this is what their meeting would be like, since it was tame and solemn and painful, Tony graciously glossing over their past and Loki letting him. They never did communicate that well, but I also wanted to show Loki how Tony had changed.
That's how I inevitably write stories; I get an idea and it usually expands more and more. That's how the series came into fruition; I could have easily made it a stand alone story but I had already envisioned Tony and Loki's lives into their forties-fifties.
My Tony has always been a bit emotional, I'm afraid; which is probably why so many people didn't like him. But your interpretation was very nice to read; I always wondered how other people thought things would play out. So this was really a treat and I appreciate it immensely. :DD *hugs you back*
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