dfgh i super love how you said that suna's character matches with the mood of the story bc my stories in general always have fluctuating characterization for characters bc i make them adjust to the story rather than having the story adjust to them. i always thought it was a turn-off to readers bc that makes it inconsistent but!! you like it!! so!! im very happy!! hehe ... and i agree the pool scene was a bit intense (writing that was the most challenging bc it was the climax of the story and i think it also turned out to be the longest one?).
(also ill admit i really just take adventure of the unreliable narrator trope when it comes to suna ... in my personal opinion suna is only the type to have emotional turmoils during the early pining stages ... when they actually get together its osamu who actually freaks out a lot more but we dont see that bc i havent yet written a post-relationship piece or anything in osaum's pov :P)
anyhow ... thank you so much for taking the time to read my fics (i see your username pop around a lot when i see comments and respond to them :>) i really appreciate it T^T
it was an amazing writing please keep it up <3 oh now that you say it i think the unreliable narrator trope fits with suna character very well. I laughed thinking about osamu realizing that he is indeed dating suna a few months later, it took him some time to sink it lol :))) yw i really love the way you write
ugh i really am obsessed with the unreliable narrator trope for suna and im very happy you appreciate it haha (also tysm for the encouragement i will try my best with writing more content for sunaosa)
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