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  1. scifiromance Fri 29 May 2020 07:00AM UTC

    I definitely became fond of Tommen too!

    There would certainly be an awkward age gap for Eddara. I wouldn't put it past Olenna or Jon Arryn to set up a 13/14 year old with a 19/20 year old though, sigh. Angry Benjen. Better than Robert or Jaime maybe, though Benjen/Berena tried with the latter: that was a great story too! :)

    Sansa/Willas was another marriage option for her, though any POV for that wouldn't be as endearing as Tommen.

    There's always Eddara/Oberyn if Doran played different moves. That would be volatile!

    That would only really have a chance though if Rhaegar had won and Elia was still alive.

    Or if Mellario died, Doran himself for her, that could be interesting. Can you tell yet I like how you explore the different kingdoms? Lol. In this shorter piece too, the Westerlands and Casterley Rock were well realised.

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    1. dwellingondreams Fri 29 May 2020 03:26PM UTC

      Oh I don't think Olenna or Jon Arryn would have an issue with that age difference, it just might be some awkward dynamics between characters- that said, maybe Eddara would thrive in the peaceful and prosperous Reach and get along well with a 13/14 year old Willas, who knows.

      I like exploring the different kingdoms too- I have plans for a more long-term fic that heavily involves the North and the Stormlands (but moreso world-building the Stormlands) so I really like exploring the differences between cultures and various locales.

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      1. scifiromance Fri 29 May 2020 03:53PM UTC

        I look forward to whatever you decide to explore next, the Stormlands will be very interesting! I know that I enjoyed what you developed of their culture through Argella Baratheon's POV.

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