Oh man, thanks for all the kind words! It's always lovely to get any kind of comment but detailed ones are just icing on a slice of lovely feedback cake.
I've been really struggling with writing in the last few years to pare down the flowery descriptions I once favored so it's nice to hear that that stripped down language is still conveying imagery clearly.
Pulling from childhood is where I got that homeroom almost joke idea...I can clearly remember debating in grade school about whether our teachers just lived in the classroom. Now that I have quite a few educator friends it's funny to consider what they might imagine we do on the weekends or in the evenings. I imagine that Aizawa is particularly private so rumors are even more common.
Those paragraph breaks were an intentional formatting choice, hopefully trying to hammer the idea home that Bakugou at the very least is not at 100% in these moments, losing time but also suffering from some level of shock.
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Nicole_Silverwolf on Chapter 1 Wed 13 May 2020 12:03AM UTC
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