Long oneshots like these always have a place in my heart as a writer because I understand the dedication put into making it. This was absolutely beautiful.
Your phasing throughout the whole thing was amazing. I felt the development of their feelings grow the further I read through, and I particularly liked how it kept blooming, never plateauing. Each scene is just one notch higher from the previous, and that's so good!
You wrote them so well. Kudos x100 if only possible ✨
kinda gasped when i saw ur name in my inbox bc :O an og tskkg writer!!!!!! thank u so much. writing this made me lose my goddamn mind, if i'm being honest, bc for some reason it took me longer than usual for a word count like this and i was just so very sleep-deprived, so it means a lot to get a nod at this from u!!!! T___T<3
it means so much to me that u mentioned this actually! the fact that u felt their r/s grew from every scene etc bc tbh i was so insecure that i made them get together too fast but im glad u seemed to think it was enough to be convincing ahhh!!
ure an angel, truly, thank u. writing tskkg is a pain at times bc of how soft i want them to be than canon HHHH <3 truly, my heart is so warm oh my god. thank u for this. i will be thinking abt this comment 4ever every time i write a tskkg.
(and yes!!!!!! my fave oc ever, he was a joy to write, i'm happy people loved this sunshine T^T)
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