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  1. Aryashi on Chapter 10 Sat 28 Mar 2020 06:17PM UTC

    MARTIN! MARTIN GOT HIS MEMORIES BACK!!! And I love how Martin laid out flat how Jon is utterly terrible for the web. 'Darling i love you but you literally can't lie to save your life and couldn't manipulate your way out of a paper bag. let me be the spider spouse'. I especially like how Martin didn't just get good things. He got some of the scars, some of the emotional baggage. It feels right.

    Speaking of feeling right, I'm glad presenting Naomi with that choice finally made up her mind. The Lonely is insidious and tempting, but giving yourself up to it as a binary choice makes it way less so. I'm glad she got out. She deserves it. The negotiations with Mike were fuckin hilarious, by contrast. Martin playacting at harmless, A++. Threatening Mike on the roof? A+++++++. Love me a scary spider boi. And Jon negotiating with the Dark. I don't know if I've mentioned it, but Jon and Martin using non-interference as such a huge bargaining chip when they know for a fact no ritual will work anyway is amazing. It's kind of darkly hilarious. "Oh yeah, we'll leave you to your rituals. Doing nothing to stop you from doing that thing that isn't gonna work anyway sure is a big concession. Yeeeeup." XDD

    Looking forward to everyone coming together to beat Jonah's ass. Thanks for posting!!

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    1. Wolftraps on Chapter 10 Sat 28 Mar 2020 08:24PM UTC

      I mean, no one ever escapes one of my fics without at least a little extra trauma.

       

      Thank you!

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