Comment on levels of investment

  1. wolfhouse Thu 09 Apr 2015 01:04PM UTC

    This is seriously one of the best fics i have read lately. I don't know where to begin. At the beginning i didn't think the fic would be too outstanding - seeing as the plot didn't seem that strong. BUT. I loved how you got everyone's character on point, leaving no one out and still experimenting with different scenarios (everyone trying smth new) without anyone being ooc.
    Also, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR INCLUDING NARITA AND KINOSHITA PROPERLY AND AMAZINGLY! THAT WAS VERY IMPORRTANT TO ME! Because they are part of the team.
    And the plot was amazing too! Of course, in hindsight i cannot tell anyone how you managed to write nearly 10000 words about only one training match (and entirely with slight charakter developement, with Ennoshita's conclusions and all).. But it was so well written and never was I tempted to skip parts because of boredom (as i tend to do sometimes, shame on me)!
    I really enjoyed thinking about the future Karasuno and in-team dynamics. Also, Yams being protective of and a good sempai for the new, yet unknown future first years was so dann precious!
    In short, I reaaally like your fix and also thank u. I hope my English was good enough and understandable.

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    1. skittidyne Sun 12 Apr 2015 05:06PM UTC

      finger guns, tongue clicks, sparkles

      aaaaaaaa this comment ;o;

      narita and kinoshita are very important to me, too. i want to see more of them (and ennoshita), so i think i'm incapable of writing them when there's team shenanigans going on. MORE SECOND YEARS. and i wish i knew how i wrote 10k about basically one scene, too... -v-;; i guess future headcanons/wishes can fill up a lot of words.

      your english was really great! i'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thank you for reading/commenting! <3

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