Oh my god, oh my god, where do I begin?! This is everything. You write so well and fluidly, and what really stood out to me about this was how excellently you wrote the volleyball match. Not only was it nice to read something where everyone got a bit silly, but all the action and motion was vivid and spot-on. I loved sneaky Ennoshita, and how cute Kiyoko and Yachi were with each other and everyone else, and how well Suga's fun side and Daichi's serious side balanced each other so well, and basically the characterisation of everyone. Even Narita and Kinoshita getting screentime was so perfect. And you can tell that the new team, how you imagine it, is going to be so perfect. Tanaka and Tsukishima as the psychological snarkforce! Amazing!
But of course, Tsukishima and Yamaguchi's relationship... oh my god. Everything about that was so on-point. You captured the depth of their relationship while still making them a little bit frivolous. And it really felt like you got into Tsukishima's mind, with his reactions to everything having a wonderful consistency. Especially the way he felt about everyone jumping on Yamaguchi crying—that had incredibly realistic emotional intensity!
Basically I just loved this fic a lot. Thanks so much for sharing it!
oh my god, thank you so much!! ;; i want to frame this comment and stare at it every time i write. (i was super worried about characterization and i'm v gratified to see that it was okay!) okay but seriously thank you for this comment <3
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