I enjoy Harry's pov of your story, the subtle changes to canon and the hints that things will play out differently in the future. But what I'm really here for is Dudley's redemption arc, which I think you've written well. I'm a little afraid for the summer holidays, where it would be super easy for Dudley to revert to his old Harry bullying self
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Romilly on Chapter 7 Tue 03 Dec 2019 06:58PM UTC
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