ohhh this au,, your MIND. I loved the world building and how immersive it was. it never felt like an info dump, ya know? like I was getting the context I needed when I needed it, I admire authors that can do that sm!!!! and just,, GAH this was so cool. renjun’s narrative and jeno’s secrets and jaemin’s role I was eating ALL of it up. also the other dreamies as the underdog squad >>>>> NICE. the pairing (the 2’s and 3!!!) interactions were sooo ,, hh soft and tender I’m aching ;-; especially at the end with nomin kissing and talking about renjun then going to get him together just ,,, I’m on my knees !!!! hmbgffgvb this was really great, thank you for the hard work you put into this & sharing!!! legend!!
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