throughout the story, walang ibang lumabas sa bibig ko kung hindi "my god baekhyun ang tanga tanga mo" medj frustrating siyang basahin kasi ang tanga talaga ng character ni b, but that only means your writing has an effect on your readers. anyway, there are some things that could have been worded better, also kind of bitin din (JUSTICE PLS!) but overall i really enjoyed reading it. salamat! <3
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nakatulala on Chapter 5 Tue 13 Aug 2019 03:58PM UTC
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