the pacing of everything was really beautiful and i loved you developed noren and nomin. i wouldve hoped for a bit for renmin but i didnt feel that theyre relationship at the end was insincere by any means unlike what can sometimes happen in a polyamorous fic.
i would really appreciate an epilogue of some sort just to see how nomin would go about integrating renjun into their relationship especially in the eyes of the piblic (if they even do ever reveal it to the public). maybe some further development between renmin as they discover each other in a time when theyre not as emotionally needy and reliant on each other. then again im happy to use my imagination...
but overall thank you so much for writing such a beautiful story. i can really see the amount of detail and nuance that when into this and im especially so greatful because the norenmin tag is pretty dry. Thanksss!!
Thank you for reading and for leaving a comment! It’s actually my first time writing poly and I was so nervous despite the research I put into it. I’ll do better next time with the RenMin or “the other couple”! I’m glad you enjoyed!
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