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  1. Bendisa Mon 22 Apr 2019 04:22AM UTC

    /about to swear fealty to you like WWX did to JC, because you have my heart. Gosh. Like I swear, you get Jiang Cheng and Wei Ying so so well, that I just want to hear all of your thoughts on them, read everything you ever want to write about them, because holy moly. how blessed is our fandom to have you write for us.

    (I'm sorry, I never replied to your reply to my comment on Golden, I am an awful awful blobfish, like I read your replies over and over because it really makes my day when my little humble comment/rambling can make somebody happy, and basically, I will get to it, hopefully!!)

    But back to this fic.

    Oh, you can have my heart over and over again. Like just how are you able to convey these characters so true??? Like with just a few words you're able to establish their characters and that's just the beginning.

    I love the fact that JC knows of WWX's sacrifice, and I humbly plead if you ever want to take a stab at how JC finds out, like I already pledged my heart to you, I don't know what else I can do, really, but just a lot of screeching and happiness. like, finally have my yunmengduo heart be satisfied?? (but will never be over them)

    I love how Jiang Cheng isn't above playing dirty, isn't above having Wei Ying doing the dirty works, just oh my heart flutters.

    Like how at the beginning you establish that they're on different grounds in their relationship, but it's still some resemblence of fine, even if it's not completely 100% able to read each other.

    I will also never stop screaming about JYL, my queen. Yes. Yes. I adore that Yu Ziyuan has them immune to this poison; like of course, she would. Oh, I would love to see what else she has taught them.

    But yes, I love how in this fic, JC stands by WWX's side. Like I haven't finished the novel but I mean to, but I know what happens, but I die at how JC's loyalty for WWX.

    Hi, are you getting a line by line commentary? Why yes, because I love your fic too much to not.

    I love how loyal Wei Ying is, how that line of, you don't have to do this alone. (Boy, when will you take that advice for yourself????)

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    1. Bendisa Mon 22 Apr 2019 04:35AM UTC

      love WWX's entrance. oh my heart, be still. I love how his earlier question rings true because he can be anything that JC would like him to be, and just oh, that submission/loyalty. (Like this is the beast/monster that you are afraid of and he is completely tamed/loyal to JC).

      And that final line of "over my dead body!" /guh, dead, destroyed. (Oh, and don't think I didn't miss how WWX was letting his robes dip)

      And yes, they have seen hell, they will claw back their way, and you dare not mess with those who have lost so much.

      And the last part? Oh, oh, oh. Just *cries* in happiness. Like I love that this topic is breached, how WWX lets his insecurity come through, how JC is like you fucking idiot, like look at these boys!! but at least they are finally communicating awkwardly!!!

      Just!!! I love how WWX is like I will be part of this clan as much as you allow me to, as long as you're okay with it, and I love how JC is like, let them come, I don't fear anyone. You're with me, and I dare them to even try to take you away from me.

      I also love that convo where it shows that no matter how dark and bleak it is, they are still JC and WWX in their bickering/teasing way?

      And that bell ceremony, I love how JC takes the bell and is like, WWX is mine. And then kiss.

      Sigh, I'm just so so pleased and satisfied. I would love to see what else you write in this world or Golden or etc, just !!!! Thank you seriously.

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      1. jusrecht Mon 22 Apr 2019 06:32PM UTC

        YOU GOT THAT LOYAL MONSTER IMPRESSION AGDHSJDK THAT'S WHAT I WAS AIMING FOR ;_______; Because seriously? I just love yiling laozu so much in all his terrifying glory and the idea of JC owning all that badassery purely bcos WWX is /loyal/ to him hits so many of my buttons it's literally the reason I started writing this fic.

        Yessss awkward communication is better than nothing. And they will /forever/ bicker. Before everything else, they're brothers who grew up together. It's part of their relationship. In fact it's practically their trademark ugh ;;;;

        Thank you so so so much for this huge boost of confidence. I still have so many things I want to write about these two and knowing that there is somebody like you out there who loves them just as much gives me more motivation and courage. SO AGAIN THANK YOU 💜❤️

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    3. jusrecht Mon 22 Apr 2019 06:14PM UTC

      Excuse me while I weep all over your comment /again/ like you have NO idea how happy reading this makes me ;____________;

      (Don't worry about the reply in the other fic but thank you all the same for mentioning it I'm touched aaaahh)

      I love love LOVE the line-by-line commentary thank you so much 💕💕💕

      As for a stab on the revelation scene, I do have a few ideas floating around. We'll see if I can work on one of them in the near future :D

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