Day one. Day one, and there was already a minor slip-up. It’ll only get worse, I just know it. I love the way you write this story, and it’s not too much, like, Flash is not a completely horrible person, and he’s trying to make amends, so that’s really well written.
I love this story, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
P.S Bit off topic, but I couldn’t help but notice in the last chapter that you used the British flavours of crisps, which are awesome, so which one of those is your favourite?
I like plain crisps but the flavours are British as I'm British. Makes it hard to write about an American high school as all the school rules in the UK are so strict, for example for bullying you could be suspended for a month!
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