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  1. fayth (zanarkand) Thu 21 Feb 2019 03:24PM UTC

    noctis lucis caelum

    okay I haven't even finished reading but I scrolled down just to say this now:

    the flan gloops after him

    the flan gloops

    gloops

    asfdkjglkds this is the best descriptive word for a flan's movement I've ever seen. I love it.

    Okay, finished reading and wow! This was so good. Really intense, the action was gripping and written so well. I love the prompt--I've never given thought to what would happen outside Insomnia when power went out in places. And I love the bros being heroes, and Noct being reckless but awesome. And the way you wrote his getting electrocuted by the daemon was good, it really gave a good picture of his confusion on what happened. Amazing fic :D

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    1. chasingfigments Thu 21 Feb 2019 07:25PM UTC

      I was very proud of that line. XD

      I’m glad you liked it! I was really excited when I found the prompt—I hadn’t considered what it would be like to experience a blackout, either, and then I couldn’t stop thinking about it. Writing Noct and the rest of the bros being heroes was a lot of fun. Thanks for commenting!

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