Ahhhhhhh oh my goodness!!!! What's gonna happen?????
I love how you describe things??? It's very evocative??? In just like the last chunk all the little details and word shifts had me hanging. The word 'prey' to the tinfoil bit and like. I could just spend hours taking a highlighter over words and going 'look!!! At!!!! This!!!!' And all mights perspective was gold!!!!!!
dfhdajadk ahhh thank you!!!! i was really trying to practice my descriptions since I tend to rely on dialog, and since i wanted to impose this sense of isolation, i had turn to the senses. its actually really fun to work with heightened senses in this fic because they make the world a lot more colorful to me
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