Aaaaaaaaah I love themmmmm! Also I absolutely 100% believe that this is what happened, it's just so perfect. Of course Dutch forgot, of course Johnny quietly freaked out, of course both of them WORRY about each other without ever TALKING ABOUT IT. And their voices are just spot-on, as others have said, the whole feelings scene at the end is just exactly right. <333333
I'm going to be so sad if we ever get a flashback and this gets nullified, because I was writing a long like "yes, of course this is what happens, of course this is something John's insecurities would trip on that Dutch wouldn't even notice" and now I really want it to be canon! I'm so glad the voices worked for you, they are such fun to write. Thank you very much! <3
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