Gosh, I love how you brought in Ye Qiu. The way you write, the words used, the line break. It's beautiful. Also, the reasons Ye Xiu seeked Ye Qiu but only voiced one. HHNN...
"“Thanks, I'm glad to hear that whenever you look at your kind, loving brother, all you see is a skinny chicken,” “A cool, shameless dragon that is best at protecting everything but himself. Always needs a strong, beautiful warrior princess like me to battle off all the unsavory sorts.”" I love these comparison soo much. Dragon!Ye Xiu is the best. Yes, Mucheng, you're the best princess and I want to see you obtain victory in your battle to protect Ye Xiu's virginity even when I wish for others to pounce on him. Lol. That entire conversation was wonderful. I love brother Ye Xiu with his little sister Mucheng. I love it when Ye Qiu and Muchen ganged up on Ye Xiu, that's perfect!
"“If you were here, you'd call me stupid and smother me in blankets for even saying that. Then you'd go and set everyone on fire with a smile. No one would hear the end of it. You’ve rubbed off on Mucheng in really scary ways, I hope you know that.”" Wow. Scary smiling Muqiu. I... I want to see more of that now.
Getting cornered and having a "Give me your money and no one gets hurt" face would make me think of Han Wenqing so it's really funny (and very serious and sad as well) that it's Huang Shaotian. I love how other pro-players notices something and are so concerned. HHNNN. My heart. Feels like crying and breaking but also want to be strong for them. Must continue reading on, be strong me, for them, for him!
Han Wenqing's talk with the now sick Ye Xiu is exactly how I imagine them to be and that makes me happy to read they're so in-character and sad because I crave more. "It was only a shame that this would be where he and his long-time rival would part ways." No. Fuck. //runs away hiding tears
"The entire stadium was silent. No one dared to breathe as they all gaped in wide-eyed shock at the result of the semi-final matches. Tyranny was defeated." FUCK IT ALL, THAT ENTIRE PART JUST- KILL ME. HHHHNNNN!! sobs... while chanting... Glory... Glory... Glory to the all... sobs... Then, fuck me again, Han Wenqing repeating that same line Ye Xiu did in his POV. Just. Kill me already, quickly please. I can't take this slow murdering. This fic feels like someone stabbed me and left the knife in for me to bleed out in a really slow manner.
Ye Xiu stealing Han Wenqing's line (“See you onstage.”) is 120% so good and what a troll, Ye Xiu, I love you so much.
BROHUG!!! WHEEEEEE!!!! Finally, some fluff and happy moments! Again, I love how all our favourite characters are all "If you need anything, contact me." towards Ye Xiu. They're so united and in synced. Then, BOOM! I love how once Han Wenqing turns away, his mood took a 180° That was beautiful. His entire POV is so awesome and satisfying. Been there for his ups and downs? My heart. Rivals and friends? I love this. Fight for Ye Xiu? Hell yes. Qingqing, go. Go do your thing. //cries happy tears and vehemently hoping I'll get to see dearest mob boss rip in EE (Like, yes, the sickness is unrelated to EE but I still blame and hate them a lot ok?? Ok)
Ye Xiu's and Ye Qiu's brotherly moment? So many thumbs up for you right now. Ye Xiu's and Mucheng's sibling moment? KNIFE.
“Shame? What is that? You can give it to me if you find it. I like free things.” //coughs blood "Misty Shores: no way, not God Ye, he's like...fucking Glory immortalized!!!" Q_Q Same bro, same. "The Real Ye Qiu V: Don’t scare me like this. Stranger Things: Who are you really?" AHAHAHA, this really breaks the mood and made me laugh.
“This will be our last match together, One Autumn Leaf. After that you and I will part ways so let’s win the championships with everyone. Then everything will finally be over. ” Cries non-stop.
Ye Xiu's final moments POV? :')
I would love it if it ended with bashing of EE but they don't deserve the screentime and Mumu's ending is too good.
Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful story! I enjoyed reading it.
HOLY COW THANK YOU FOR LEAVING SUCH A LONG RESPONSE (low-key took a while to respond because I wanted a free block of time to properly respond to everything)
I love bringing YQ in whenever I can lol. There's just so much I can do with his character. I'm really glad you liked how I wrote this fic since I spent a long time choosing the right words and creating the right atmosphere.
Sibling relationships are just <3 especially ones where they're making fun of each other or are like, I hate you, but once something bad happens, whatever or whoever caused it better gtfo
yep, YQ and SMC really grew close in this fic, having a good time ganging up on their big bro lol, which is a good thing considering...the ending of this fic
I totally HC that SMQ rubbed off more on SMC than YX, I mean, YX only appeared in her life when she was 11-12. Scary smiling SMQ is the best, he may be a Nice Guy, but you really don't want to mess with him. Can't imagine a completely nice guy would be able to live the life he and his sister lived.
Pro players being low-key and high-key supportive of each other are the best. good sportsmanship is so wonderful, especially since that's not (and especially in this fic) not the case. Really, people should be concerned when HST is not acting like his typical, chatty self.
Ah, yes, than HanYe scene was one of my favorite to write :) everything from the confrontation, to their freaking awesome last match together, to their last words to each other (ah, I made myself even sadder because this made me think of YX's last words to everyone qwq)
your analogy of slow murder...is basically a one sentence bad description of what this fic is LOL
can't write TKA without throwing some humor or fluff in, even if this is supposed to be angst-heavy lol (actually, probably made the angst even worse rip)
haven't decided if I want to do a follow-up yet since I like the ending as is, but yeah there's no way that EE would escape unscathed
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