ooh, a very intriguing and chilling start to the fic--I've had a little look forward at the chapters ahead as well and it looks very interesting so far. I really like how you brought in the sense of fear and terror here, especially with poor Adam. It really gives a sense that he is innocent in this whole thing the Enchantress is doing. And by the seems of it, it's a longfic, and I live for longfics, so I'm sure I'll be in for a good read this summer!
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NaturePointsTheWay on Chapter 1 Mon 20 Nov 2017 09:05AM UTC
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