Thank you! I'm glad you like their interactions, since they're really fun to write. I don't know if the writing style will continue to hold up, since it's been quite a while since I wrote for this fic, but it's good to hear that I succeeded in writing to their time period / setting a tone for their time period! (Naruto time periods are funny things.) If anything stands out as too modern or too out of place, or too Western, I'd be glad to have it (gently) pointed out if it bothers anyone too much.
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LullabyKnell on Chapter 3 Tue 24 Oct 2017 06:11AM UTC
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