My favourite Stiles line: “Boyd, catch me.” Just something about it, made me laugh so much. Just the idea of Peter walking in, looking all delectable and Stiles suddenly loses all strength in his legs and asks Boyd, of all people, to catch him. And you can bet that Peter noticed. Hilarious!
And then how the price for the rendezvous went from 'pack discount' to 'virgin special' to 'free'. Another very funny section. Methinks that if Stiles kept holding off he might have gotten Peter to pay him!
I don't even know how they made the transition to Daddy but I have always found that to be a very sexy Steter kink so I was delighted when that showed up.
One sentence confused me though. "Now that Peter was going to fuck him he’s back?" Did you mean to say "pack" instead of "back"?
To sum up, a hot, humourous and enjoyable fic. I love the idea of Peter being an escort (usually fics have him running an escort agency; I prefer your take on it) and can't wait for the next instalment.
YES, that's my favorite line of the entire thing too. Just imagine Boyd's deadpan face! That was the goal ;)
Probably Peter so wanted his hands on the Stiles booty it didn't matter how.
It was supposed to be Pack I'm not sure how it changed? The word document may have had a moment during editing or I could have who knows but I'll fix it!
Yeah, I had another pair of eyes and we boggled over the Daddy kink bit then kinda went ahh whatever it will still work though I possibly could go back to the bit with the website and more than just imply it's there. In any case, I don't take myself very seriously and I wanted it to be sexy but fun.
It's his show and his alone ;) Thank you so much for your insight and comment!
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