Like okay for starters lets just go for blatant flattery: I Love your writing style. Capital L.
now for the nonsensical snippets with commentary!
which is good, because truthfully, even a blob of pixels falling into the empty void of space hits different than it used to.
no coherent thoughts from me i just like this impact.
The thing is, after one race, Rocky commits a track to memory. Then immediately finds all the shortcuts, then beats me. Multiple times. I need to show him Time Trial mode
i love i love i love. Use that near-perfect memory Rocky!
Memories feel like that. Except I don't get any body art out of it. Just moments where I feel like I missed a step going down the stairs, because the way the light hits my glasses looks exactly like it did when I learned the Sun was dying, and then again when I remembered the Sun was dying.
OH MY GOD PEAK DESCRIPTION OH MY HOLY OH MY (this was a margin note as i was reading, so ill clarify to say that this also applies to the paragraphs before, liek the whole thing of the description/analogy/im too tired to know what it is)
Mid-reading me said it best: "i wqs so wildly disprentied i fellt like _I_ WAS the one frekaing the duck out that was SO good holy DHIT" (sic)
and
"YES [It's fuzzy from traveling through blood and muscle before aluminum and xenonite.]"
This is so so very good. I am pestering my friend to hurry up and read phm even more so now, just so i can show him this :) Thank you for sharing your work <3<3<3
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