This was so good! So hot. And I'm always a fan of awkward sex. Good job! Those references killed me. I just enjoyed the whole thing!
Next time, don't over think. I know you were feeling unsure about some stuff, but after talking to you about what you had originally thought to write vs what you did, I think you should go with your gut. The descriptions were really good and added a lot more to the experience.
Thanks for all your help! I'm always thrilled when someone catches the references ;) Have to keep it real. <3 Good news all around. Your exactly right and I shall, looking forward to where your series takes us next.
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