Ghost spiraling is so relatable. I love that he tried to be less scary and took off his mask despite being in a relatively public space. This softer side of him will come in handy during Soap's recovery, I'm sure.
Referring to himself as a ghost instead of the Ghost and the inner monologue was an interesting insight into the inner workings of Simon Riley. Also! I adore how you write the others and how they interact with one another.
Great chapter!
Edit: Totally forgot to mention: the medical stuff and details are amazing!
Ghost definitely has a soft side and it definitely comes in handy in this fic. Ugh he's the sweetest and I love him.
Ahhhh you spotted the "a ghost" rather than "Ghost"! I wondered if anyone would pick up on that!
I had some help with the neuro stuff and wrote some from personal knowledge so I'm really glad it translated onto the page well. Thanks so much for commenting 💜
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