I loved it. I love how Leia can set the terms without having to resort to the dark side. I don’t suppose we could get a next chapter that had a small Leia pov to speak to Anakin, and then the other POVs? Maybe that’s me being greedy. :)
I like that this story is mostly seen through Leia’s burning golden eyes but that occasionally, you branch to other POVs to get a different take on what’s happening. I don’t see why you can’t continue to do that, although I know you ultimately know best, it’s your writing we’re all addicted to after all.
I also noticed two typos, the first being here: No, you deal with the conceuances of your failures. and the second when you say there are six people standing around the table, when there in fact, seven. Leia, Serra, Luke, Han, Bail, Winter + Ahsoka.
Thank you, fixed the typos!
I don't know if we will have a lot of Anakin and Leia talk in this fic, but there will be some, as we saw in the previous chapter, and in the next one when Luke talks to him. But in the end, it is a lot of things that were already said, they will talk again, but I don't think there will be more than 2 more conversations between them that I write.
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