I have many things I'd like to say about this, but I don't even know if I can articulate it well enough. Love the characterization, it felt very faithful to their personalities, I love how you managed to develop both of them individually and as a couple in such a short story (like it was genuinely impressive!! also you wrote this so well and quickly after the AQ??? extra kudos!). Yelan my beloved, always a treat seeing her, and her friendship with Nefer was really heartwarming~ I wanted to say more because reading this in this current moment I am really mattered, and I don't want to get too weird and personal haha, but seriously, thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us 💛 Nefer and Lauma are some of my faves amongst the new cast and you did such a wonderful job with them!
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JupiterAndMoons Fri 24 Oct 2025 01:38PM UTC
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